I've never posted a fanfic, but I wrote this one and cammie liked it and i like it, too. So just tell me if you like it or what you think i should change.



I awoke from my heavenly dream and sat up. I looked over to find Blake snoring. I smiled and got out of bed. The cold air of the house rush across my whole body. I pulled my sweats on and went downstairs to the kitchen. I decided to attempt make Blake breakfast and pulled the bisquick out of the cabinet. I poured it into the sizzling pan. I let it sit and cook. I poured some coffee in a mug for me and got orange juice for Blake. He hated coffee. I smelled the heavenly aroma of pancakes and flipped them. They looked descent. I put them on two plates and set them on the table. I heard a creaking upstairs and knew Blake had woken up from the smell of pancakes. I smiled and put his orange juice on the table. He came down, fully dressed. I was shocked. He never got dressed before breakfast. “Hey, Babe! I need to go out today, with Chris. I only have time to eat breakfast and then I need to leave.” He grabbed a pancake and took a sip of orange juice and ran to the door. “I got to go! Bye!” I ran to the door and gave him a kiss. “Bye! Have fun!” I was worried. Blake never just sprung stuff on me and Chris wouldn’t be up this early. I ran upstairs and got dressed. I decided some shopping would get my mind off of it. I spent a couple hours shopping when it was about lunch time. I went to P.F. Chang’s and sat down. The waiter came and gave me some water and then moved to the next table mechanically. I looked around and saw Blake sitting in the corner. I smiled and got up. I walked over to him wanting to surprise him. When I was about 10 feet away, someone else came up to him. I froze in my tracks. It was a young girl, about my age. She had brown hair and was wearing a skimpy, little skirt. Blake got up and hugged her. My heart stopped beating. Quickly, I realized that I was just sitting here staring at two people and went back to my table. I wasn’t hungry anymore and grabbed all my bags. I walked outside and ran to the car. I jumped in and tears started running down my face. I bet I dropped a bag on the way over, but I didn’t care. I wiped my face and tried to stop crying, remembering what my mom used to tell me when I first started to drive: never drive while crying. I turned the car on and pulled out of the mall. I fought tears the whole way home but once, I was home I couldn’t hold it in anymore and I just let it loose. Tears streamed down my face like waterfalls. I cried for a good two hours when I finally fell asleep. It was only 4 o’clock, but I needed to do something to stop the tears. It was a dreamless sleep. I hadn’t had one of those in a long time. Every night was filled with dreams of me and Blake. I woke up and looked at the clock. It was 10 o’clock. I didn’t make a move to get up. I heard the front door open and knew it was Blake. I would normally go greet him with a hug and a kiss, but I didn’t move an inch. I don’t know if Blake felt a coldness in the house or if everything seemed normal to him. An hour later, I heard the bedroom door open. I wasn’t in the mood to talk so I acted like I was asleep. I felt his hand on my arm. I wanted to jerk away, it felt so cold. I opened my eyes. He smiled. “Hey. What did you do today?” I didn’t know what to say. Did he ask me a question? His voice seemed like miles away. I shrugged my shoulders in return. His face went blank, then angry, then sincere. “What’s wrong?” “Nothing.” He looked unsatisfied. “Tell me. You can trust me.” I became angry. How could he say that? “Can I?” His face was confused. “Yes. You can.” I got up and changed into some jeans. I packed up my suitcase. Blake was confused. I wiped a tear from my cheek. I stood in front of him. “Bye.” I walked out the bedroom door. I heard him get up from the bed and follow me. “Where are you going?” I felt his hand on my arm. He jerked me back but I kept going. I went down the stairs. I opened the front door. “What’s going on?” I turned, I was furious. “Are you serious? Have you not been paying attention?! You’re cheating on me, you jerk! Did you think that I was just some toy that you could play with then move on when you got tired of me!? Well, I’m not a toy! So, so, I don’t know! But, I’m done! I’m sure your little girlfriend will do it with you!” I didn’t know what else to say so I left. Blake’s mouth was wide open. I opened the door and walked outside. It was pouring down rain, making the snow melt into slush. It was perfect for my mood. My mind was so whacked out I didn’t even think of driving in my car. I walked right past my car and started walking down the road. It was dark and wet. I heard a door open and slam. I rolled my eyes, knowing it was Blake. I kept walking, hoping he didn’t see me. I guess he did because he came running after me. He pulled me by the arm. “Let me go!” I tried to pull away. He pulled me tighter. “What are you talking about?” I started to cry but the rain covered it. “I didn’t cheat on you!” “Stop hiding it! I saw you at P.F. Chang’s with that chick!” His eyes got soft and he sort of chuckled which made me even angrier. “That was just some fan who came up to me and decided to sit down with me. It was weird.” My eyes sort of softened when I realized that even if it wasn’t true, I wanted to be with him. I was soaked and cold and I started to shiver. Blake looked at me with anxiousness in his eyes. I pulled him in for a passionate kiss. The rain poured down on both of us. The moment was perfect and I didn’t want it end and apparently Blake didn’t want it to, either because when I started to pull away, he just moved to my neck. I wrapped my arms around his neck. The rain poured down on my face and soaked my hair. Blake moved back from my neck to my mouth. I smiled into the kiss. I pulled away and then hugged him. He whispered into my ear, “Why would I want anything but you?” I smiled and whispered back, “I have no idea…it scared me to lose you.” I could smell his amazing cologne. “It scared me to lose you, too. Don’t ever try and run away from me again, please.” His breath tickled my ear and sent shivers down my spine. I smiled and bit down on my lower lip. I pulled away so I could look at him. “Oh gosh. Just when you bite down on your lower lip makes me want you. You drive me crazy!” I smiled. I decided that it was too cold and wet for us too stay out here making out so I grabbed his hand and ran inside, my bag in hand. He came up behind me and scooped me up in his arms. “I don’t think so, you’re not running away from me again.” I laughed and pressed my lips to his. He carried me into the house and carried me to the bedroom. I pulled my jeans off and pulled on my sweats. I pulled my soaking wet shirt off my cold body. I pulled a towel around myself to dry off and then pulled an old high school sweatshirt on. I climbed into bed and Blake climbed in next to me. He wrapped his arms around my waist and I quickly fell asleep with Blake’s cologne filling my nose.

That's great! Very cute, I love it. =D